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El Greco
1st December 2003, 04:19 AM
Strictly rhyming, strictly 4 words. Like this:
Another day
gone astray
Tricky
1st December 2003, 09:51 AM
Originally posted by El Greco
Strictly rhyming, strictly 4 words. Like this:
Another day
gone astray
I take it from your example that meter is not important.
so...
Extemporaneous versifying
Is trying
hgc
1st December 2003, 09:53 AM
Eat your Wheaties,
Sweeties
Cleopatra
1st December 2003, 10:20 AM
Originally posted by Tricky
[B]
I take it from your example that meter is not important.
so...
Come-on show some pity to the foreigners. Meter?
Flaming Tricky
looks kinky...
hgc
1st December 2003, 10:23 AM
Originally posted by Cleopatra
Come-on show some pity to the foreigners. Meter?
Flaming Tricky
looks kinky... OK, we can sacrifice meter, but that doesn't even come close to rhyming.
How about ...
Touching Tricky
feels sticky
(not from personal experience)
Cleopatra
1st December 2003, 10:30 AM
Originally posted by hgc
OK, we can sacrifice meter, but that doesn't even come close to rhyming.
I am a modern poet :p
(not from personal experience)
I find your need to clarify this suspicious.
Pillory's posts
terrify trolls
This is my poetry. Ok???
hgc
1st December 2003, 10:45 AM
Originally posted by Cleopatra
...
I find your need to clarify this suspicious.
Pillory's posts
terrify trolls
This is my poetry. Ok??? I'm all for non-rhyming poetry, but the title of this thread...
To rhyme
is sublime
Tricky
1st December 2003, 11:32 AM
Originally posted by hgc
OK, we can sacrifice meter, but that doesn't even come close to rhyming.
How about ...
Touching Tricky
feels sticky
(not from personal experience)
Not my fault.
Houston's ickyness
Causes stickyness
Chaos
1st December 2003, 12:30 PM
Okay, I´ll give it a try:
Royal Cleo
is awing me - Oh!
Chaos
(still applying for that court poet job)
DickK
1st December 2003, 12:56 PM
Originally posted by Chaos
Okay, I´ll give it a try:
Royal Cleo
is awing me - Oh!
Chaos
(still applying for that court poet job)
Chaos indeed, 4 words only buddy.
Your verse
ain't terse.
Chaos
1st December 2003, 01:12 PM
Originally posted by DickK
Chaos indeed, 4 words only buddy.
Your verse
ain't terse.
Okay, okay...I got carried away...
but perhaps Cleopatra can, by royal decree, declare that my poem does indeed have four word only? *beg*
Royal Cleo
awing me - O!
"O!" isn´t a word, it´s just a single letter!
Tricky
1st December 2003, 02:28 PM
Originally posted by Chaos
Chaos
(still applying for that court poet job)
As Fool,
You rule!
hgc
1st December 2003, 02:30 PM
Originally posted by DickK
Chaos indeed, 4 words only buddy.
Your verse
ain't terse. Contractions combine
words jus'fine
:D
DickK
1st December 2003, 02:57 PM
Originally posted by hgc
Contractions combine
words jus'fine
:D
Grammar's dynamic'n
demotically manic.
:golf:
uneasy
1st December 2003, 03:18 PM
Poor prostitute
Whore destitute
(four word crisscross synonym rhyme)
Lord Muck oGentry
1st December 2003, 03:23 PM
Geography?
Maps!
Biography?
Chaps!
mummymonkey
1st December 2003, 03:27 PM
Curried ants
are sustenance
El Greco
2nd December 2003, 01:12 AM
coition:
my sole mission :D
patoco12
2nd December 2003, 01:19 AM
I like my bike
Mr Manifesto
2nd December 2003, 04:40 AM
How about a four syllable rhyme to answer your challenge?
No go
Bozo
arcticpenguin
2nd December 2003, 06:33 AM
My toes
is froze!
hgc
2nd December 2003, 07:47 AM
Is Spam
from ham?
hgc
2nd December 2003, 07:48 AM
Do dogs
wear clogs?
Halbert
2nd December 2003, 09:09 AM
Does hgc
fight ennui?
Side note: I pronounce that word ehnn-you-ee, but I'm not positive that's the actual pronunciation.
arcticpenguin
2nd December 2003, 09:17 AM
Rhyme time
is sublime.
Rosencrantz
2nd December 2003, 11:48 AM
You stupid fly...
die!
hgc
2nd December 2003, 11:55 AM
Originally posted by Halbert
Does hgc
fight ennui?
Side note: I pronounce that word ehnn-you-ee, but I'm not positive that's the actual pronunciation. hgc thrilled;
ennui killed
Lord Muck oGentry
2nd December 2003, 03:23 PM
Le style,
C'est Ryle.
(Yes, yes, I know-it's easier to get a new audience than new material!)
mummymonkey
3rd December 2003, 01:03 AM
Originally posted by Halbert
Side note: I pronounce that word ehnn-you-ee, but I'm not positive that's the actual pronunciation.
[a. Fr. ennui, OF. enui:---L. in odio: see annoy, ennoy, which are older adoptions of the same Fr. word.
So far as frequency of use is concerned, the word might be regarded as fully naturalized; but the pronunciation has not been anglicized, there being in fact no Eng. analogy which could serve as a guide.]
Ennui
O E D
uneasy
3rd December 2003, 11:18 AM
Drunk punk skunk stunk.
Halbert
3rd December 2003, 02:51 PM
Originally posted by hgc
hgc thrilled;
ennui killed
hgc bored
nature abhors
Not nearly as satisfying as my first one. Even if I *do* pronounce onwee wrong.
epepke
4th December 2003, 03:23 PM
Praise "Bob":
Quit job.
pupdog
15th December 2003, 03:43 PM
Gosh, these are much too long for me. I like the 2-worders, like "Lines on the antiquity of Fleas," recited by the lady:
Quoth Madam,
"Adam had'em".
Or notifying the bosses of "The Maid's Day Off",
Dear Sirs,
"Thurs.
Hers."
Marc
15th December 2003, 04:08 PM
Four word?
How absurd!
Rosencrantz
15th December 2003, 04:40 PM
Here are my entries for the "Shakespeare summarized in a four word couplet" category. :)
Surrender? Endure?
Not sure.
Romeo, trim
your patronym?
Out, clot!
Damned spot!
Gods, direct:
bastards protect!
Physic, fie!
Not I.
Not lame,
our game!
Dawn? No:
Juliet's glow!
DrMatt
5th January 2004, 08:03 AM
Originally posted by Cleopatra
I am a modern poet :p
I find your need to clarify this suspicious.
Pillory's posts
terrify trolls
This is my poetry. Ok???
Cleo... oy...
Look. Post yours b`Ivrit and let us scramble to translate 'em.
DrMatt
5th January 2004, 08:13 AM
Folklore leaves us with this questionable quatrain:
Candy:
Dandy;
Liquor:
Quicker.
Matabiri
8th January 2004, 08:14 AM
Originally posted by uneasy
Drunk punk skunk stunk.
Plough through tough dough.
Matabiri
8th January 2004, 08:15 AM
Originally posted by DrMatt
Folklore leaves us with this questionable quatrain:
Candy:
Dandy;
Liquor:
Quicker.
Ogden Nash, I believe.
DrMatt
9th January 2004, 09:56 AM
bart's fart's
part arts.
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